Prison Dragon

Chapter 187 Afterword

postscript

The first version of Wedge was released in February 19 (it’s now in the fanfare, it’s the one with the seal in the water), and then the first version of the text was released one after another in April, probably the plot is from the current version Chaoge Juan (that is, the beginning of Yang You's self-report from the perspective of "I" in his childhood).

Tell me about the origin of this story.At the beginning, I didn’t know why I thought of the name Prison Dragon. I have never read other articles called Prison Dragon, nor have I heard any songs about Prison Dragon (I’m ignorant). At that time, I felt that there were many A place worth digging, and one day a picture suddenly appeared in front of my eyes.

In fact, when I write novels, I always conceive from the picture that appears at a certain moment, starting from the picture and then slowly thinking about the cause and effect.The first scene was like this:

In the dark palace room, two handsome bodies are naked/naked/wrapped, there is no light, only black bed curtains and layers of black gauze hanging from the roof.The light smoke from the incense burner is as viscous and sensational as the panting.

The little eunuch knocked on the door, "Report to the crown prince, Your Majesty's Tai Chi Hall has summoned you to discuss the state affairs."

A pale hand raised the heavy curtain, and the beautiful face of an adult man appeared first. He hung the bed curtain aside, his bare chest was covered with sweat, and the corners of his mouth were slightly raised. A cool smile.

The boy lay on his lap, and the man stroked his loose hair, "I'm looking for you to discuss politics."

The boy curled his fingers around the end of the man's hair, and moved to his lips to kiss him, "It must be because of the party struggle."

He propped himself up and licked the man's chin in exchange for a deep kiss. The boy leaned on the man's chest and rubbed his fingers slightly on the man's sweaty collarbone, "If it wasn't for you I have been taught it before, and I may have to be tricked by those veterans."

The man kissed his forehead, and combed his hair with his fingers, "I can only teach you these useless things, have you written down what I told you yesterday?"

The boy nodded obediently.

The man patted the boy on the back encouragingly, "If that's the case, then rest assured, Your Highness the Crown Prince."

The boy raised his head and smiled at him, got up and wiped his mottled body with a handkerchief, put on his clothes, and walked out of the palace neatly.

There was only a man left in the palace. He was lying alone on a large and scary bed, surrounded by crumpled quilts, and there was a faint musky smell in the air.

He bent his feet, wiped his fingers on his forehead, and smiled meaningfully as he looked at the direction in which the boy left.

That's right, this is the entire origin of the story of Prisoner Dragon at the beginning.

In the original scene, Ao Chen is the imprisoned dragon god. In order to get the dragon spirit to seduce the prince, he wants to take away the prince's dragon spirit. The prince is just a means for him to get the dragon spirit. He is very kind to the prince, but he has no sincerity. .

And the prince was the one who made the wrong payment infatuatedly. In the end, he was deprived of the dragon spirit and lost his country because he let go of the dragon god.

This is a tragic story through and through. The prince doesn't have such lofty ideals, and the dragon god doesn't have too much emotion, so I thought it was a sadistic novel at the beginning. This is the idea of ​​the first edition.

After writing for a long time and thinking about it for a long time, I will slowly think about the whole story, because a story cannot be supported by only two characters, let alone a long life of a person.

Then Mu Yun appeared, following her perspective, first the emperor and ministers of the new dynasty, then the past in Yang You's memory, Yang You's mother, father, brothers, courtiers...

There are more and more people, and the plot is getting more and more complicated. It can be said that I didn't think that the story of Prisoner Dragon would become what it is today.

The setting of each character is constantly being enriched. Yang You has changed from a single prince to a complex character design, and the old dragon has also changed from being heartless to miserable. The role added temporarily is awesome (yes. Yang Yuchun was really added by me on the spur of the moment) originally only as a plot tool character, I wrote and found that he was very lucky to be loved by everyone.

From November last year to May 11, there were many crashes. I just wrote the outline of Prison Dragon and I didn’t bother to write later, so there are many plots I will write The writing collapsed, and I felt that it was not enough to write and would not be able to write. This contradiction appeared concentratedly in the Southwest Volume, which is also the part that will be revised later.

At that time, I never thought that Prisoner Dragon would have so many collections and comments. I just wanted to write a different story. There is no right or wrong in this story. Even bad guys have their own positions and places where they can be forgiven. Love and hate, all emotions are intricately intertwined, not to mention the so-called pretense and slap in the face, waste material upgrades, they all have to face the hardships and tests that life must go through.

As for what this story is about, I can no longer comment after writing the story, because this story now belongs to every reader who sees it. Dear readers, what do you see, that is what I want to say. (Of course, I still hope that everyone can see more positive meanings)

When I was discussing the plot with my friends, one version was conceived like this. After Yuzi released the old dragon, he begged the old dragon not to target his people and country.Friends say don't beg, everyone has dignity and pride.He also said that it is okay if the country is destroyed because of the old dragon, and everyone is responsible for what they do.I think so, because Yuzi understands the old dragon, he respects the old dragon's idea of ​​destroying the country, and because of his pride as a monarch, he will not really beg for mercy and beg Ao Chen to let him live.I think he must have his own persistence in his heart. If the world is getting worse, he will always use himself to light the way forward.

There are also many, many experiences of deliberating the plot with my friends, including myself. In short, it was a very complicated process, and finally made the story what it is today.

First of all, I would like to thank my friends, their support is one of the motivations for me to persevere.

Of course, the biggest motivation comes from the grandparents of my readers, especially when they read the comments every day, they are very excited. They see that the characters are liked and hated by others, and they say that every character has lived. Love, seeing everyone praise my writing style (this is really nothing to praise, just take it as everyone’s love for the novel)... a lot, I will try my best to reply to everyone’s comments, and I will also refer to everyone’s comments Considering my plot setting, I can’t describe the feeling, like walking alone in the dark, obviously very lonely and scared, every time I write something, I don’t know where the road ahead is, but there will always be a road ahead. On the way, I saw someone igniting fireflies with comments, so the road ahead is no longer scary or confusing.

perhaps?I'm not very good at literary and beautiful metaphors... Basically, I recognize everyone's ID, and I will try my best to reply to everyone. There are also many readers who have been chasing after last year. Shocked, as if a woman who lived in the cold palace all the year round suddenly got the glory and excitement of the emperor's favor, because I really never thought that someone would insist on walking with me all the time. After all, this time is too long, and the novel is just a story. Just a pastime during entertainment time.

I sincerely thank everyone who accompanied me, regardless of the length of time, and thank everyone who saw Prison Dragon, whether it was clicking or reading a few chapters.I don't know how to express my gratitude...

To be honest, I write a story just to satisfy my desire to confide. The world in the book is my own world, which exists only in me.

But because of the readers, this story has the so-called value and the so-called freshness. I always believe that everyone who sees it gives the work eternal life.

2020.05.18