Heavy

Chapter 50 Breaking Dawn

Autumn is getting stronger, and there is a light rain on Cangmu Mountain.

When Chaobai came to Cangmu Mountain for the second time, he was already familiar with the roads of Cangmu Mountain. When he called Ji Ning in the palace but did not hear his voice, he had to turn around and go back, along the winding path, he arrived at Ji Ning in a short while. The plum grove where Ning often rests.However, there was no one in the depths of the plum grove, and there was only a biting mellow fragrance left in the wind, which was undoubtedly the smell of wine.

It seems that the talent left not long ago.

Chaobai licked his lips, found a relatively smooth stone slab, wiped off the dirt and snow on it, took out another flannel cloth, wiped it carefully, and then dared to lift the hem of the skirt and sit down slowly.A look of pain flashed across her face.

So icy!

However, this did not shake Chao Bai's determination to wait for Jing Ning to come back.She's heartbroken, isn't she just a bit colder!For the sake of the person I admire, what's wrong with being cold!

It's just that I didn't know how long I waited, but I always felt that my mind was not clear, and I fell into a deep sleep.

When she woke up, the white clothes of the bent man in front of her were still the same, and his deep lake-like ink blue eyes lightly swept across her face: "It's you again?"

"Your master begged me again..."

"No!!!" Chaobai stood up suddenly, and wanted to back away, but there was a plum tree behind him.Chao Bai clenched his fists tightly, stiffened his neck, and shouted loudly: "I... I came to find Shangshen!"

"Huh?" Ji Ning stood upright, standing in front of her, with a Jiaojiao figure like a long pine, about a head and a half taller than her.At this stop, even the things on his chest fell out.

Chao Bai's eyes widened suddenly, panicked to the extreme: "I'm sorry, God! I'm sorry, I'm sorry..." Saying a dozen or so sorry, he went to pick up the dropped items and return them to Ji Ning.Seeing this, Ji Ning hastily stopped her, but in the future she was too late.The next moment, Chao Bai screamed, as if he had been touched by a poisonous thorn, and the severe pain spread to his limbs and bones.

"Ah!" Chao Bai was so frightened that he sat down on the snow.

Ji Ning hurriedly picked up the piece of wood on the ground, put it back on his chest properly, and then helped Chao Bai up from the ground.

"Sorry, this tree is stubborn, it... only I can touch it."

Only then did Chao Bai recover from his shock, and he responded again and again: "No, no, I'm fine. It's just...it's so fierce..."

The corners of Ji Ning's eyes and brows were suddenly smudged with a gentle arc, the corners of her lips were slightly curved, and her scallop-like white teeth finally saw the light of day.

Actually laughed.

Chao Bai was dazzled at first, why is there such a good-looking person in the world... No, god!It looks much better than those crooked melons and dates in Tianting!

Thinking of the mother who was anxious to let her go on a blind date with a certain immortal official from an unknown palace, telling her this and that every day, arranging for her to meet various immortal men, and even having her buck teeth almost stick out during the noon banquet... She felt very uncomfortable when she got to the fairy official in her bowl.

Physiological discomfort, urgent need to wash eyes.

However, Ji Ning's appearance can't be used to wash his eyes!It is an insult to God!This made her think of other men after she went back.Everything is eclipsed in front of Jing Ning.She was so ashamed that she felt that this dirty thought had tarnished the beauty of the person in front of her!

"Are you okay?" Ji Ning saw her rubbing the hem of her clothes on the spot with a look of embarrassment and bewilderment, thinking that she was injured by the quilt returning to the wood, her smile immediately subsided, and she asked softly.

"No... I'm fine, thank God for your concern." Chao Bai patted the blood on his body, stood up staggeringly, and stretched out his red neon clothes softly, coquettishly and gorgeously in the snow.This time, she easily caught the ups and downs in Ji Ning's eyes.

She heard from the broken-mouthed Gong'e that Jing Ning is a god, and she loves red the most in her life.Red is warm, pure, mysterious and treacherous.Hundreds of years ago, the previous owner of Chongyu Palace, also known as Chongri Shangshen, wore a red dress with a myriad of charms, not flattering but bewitching, seducing the hearts of many fairies in the heavens, and his handsome appearance was not inferior to that of Ji Ning. God is fine.

With an idea, Chao Bai went to Jiuchongtian and begged Zhinu from Siyige to order an elegant red skirt for her. The girl secretly hoped to be remembered by the immortal in front of her.

It would be nice to give him one more look.

Unexpectedly, Ji Ning's eyes were full of changes, staring at her clothes for a long time, her hands trembled involuntarily.After a while, Ji Ning turned around and turned his back to Chao Bai.

It is finally at peace.

The dead silence like stagnant water.

not him.

Not the man in the dream.

Not the one who whispers "I love you" countless times in his ear with a nice voice.

Not the one who gave everything for him and would not spare anything.

There will never be any more in the world.

Therefore, after all, it is a big dream. After waking up from the dream, people are gone.Thousands of sails have passed, and he is still alone, with no one by his side.

Ziguimu emits a soft red light on the cuff, this thing is quite spiritual, after a long time of companionship, Ji Ning knows very well that what it does is to appease herself.Because just now, the corners of his eyes were wet and cold, maybe he was dazzled by the cold wind from the snow-capped mountains.

Catkin-like snowflakes fluttered and floated all over the mountain.

Only a clear and clear voice like pearls and jade resounded: "What's your name?"

When Chaobai heard him ask his name, his heart sank like a deer, his face was immediately stained with a blush, and he quickly replied: "God, my name is Chaobai!" Afraid that he didn't know which two words it was, he hurriedly added : "The morning of the sun! The whiteness of the snow!"

"Chaobai, red is not suitable for you. Next time you come, just change it." Ji Ning turned around, nodded lightly, and said lightly.

Looking at Ji Ning's beautiful face blankly, Chao Bai was cut by two clear tears.

The little girl didn't know what happened, she was extremely surprised, her eyes widened blankly: "God, what... what's wrong? I... did I do something wrong? I won't wear red clothes next time... I'm sorry, please God forgive me..." In this panic, tears fell from the eyes.

"When I came back last time, that goose-yellow dress was pretty." Ji Ning would not use any witty words to praise others, especially teenage girls.After thinking about it, I still feel that "good-looking" is more reliable.

Peeling at Bai for a moment, his eyes widened.Suddenly a flower bloomed in my heart.

It turned out that he remembered his attire when he came last time!

Does it mean that he, he... remembers himself!

"What are you looking for from me?"

"Please go back if you have nothing to do, your master is afraid to worry about you." He was referring to Bai Yuan.

Chao Bai timidly rubbed the corners of her clothes, her lips parted and closed, and wanted to say something more, but when she came back to her senses, Ji Ning had gone straight into the depths of the plum grove, without a trace of one person and one tree.

Zi Guimu may still have a few traces of Xie Suiye's consciousness left.

Xie Suiye lives up to his name, and Ji Ning saves him in dire straits, and is his dawning light.From the beginning to the end, he chased after the light and chased the shadow, willing to indulge.Don't ask why, don't ask for anything in return.

His fame is vigorous and known all over the world.

His love, together with the colorful plum grove growing out of the vast white snow, survived quietly in the world.

Their joys and sorrows are hidden deep in the snow-capped mountains, unknown and meaningless, buried by time and deeply buried by white snow.

When Jing Ning was walking in the snow, she suddenly remembered something, took out the Zi Gui Mu from her bosom, and sighed imperceptibly.

Ziguimu glowed red faintly, Jing Ning knew that it was angry with herself.Usually it is very docile, and when it falls asleep, it will obediently hide in his arms, exuding bursts of warmth.Although he didn't care about the cold, he felt that the feeling wasn't too bad.

It seems that someone is accompanying him, and he can be regarded as a favorite spiritual creature of bloggers.

Ji Ning thought it was a bit funny, but still said leisurely: "I won't give you away in the future. Just stay by my side, be obedient, and don't hurt others, okay?"

"Little one, let's go home."

The author has something to say: This is the be version of the first version of the ending (Quiet Mimi, in fact, this is the real ending I think, I hope no one hits me)

If you want to see he, please move to the next chapter

☆, Fanwai Zigui

It was a hundred years later when Ji Ning realized that the barrier of the snow mountain had been broken and an uninvited guest came to Cang Mu.

Since Gu Yanqi and Nan Yi left, he has been depressed all day long, and he doesn't know who to confide some strange thoughts in his heart with.Gan Bi went to Jiuchongtian alone, and sent an invitation to Ji Ning, inviting him to take over the grand ceremony.Ji Ning also shook her head and said, she was not happy.

Gan Bi was much more mature than before. He knew Jing Ning's temperament very well, so he had no choice but to laugh it off, stop forcing, and respectfully thanked Jing Ning.

Anyway, it was once a master and servant.

For a long time, Cangmu Mountain never had any guests.But Ji Ning held that strange piece of wood all day long, and was lost in thought, either in Meixin Pavilion, or in all places other than Meixin Pavilion.He didn't want to be bothered by others, so he set up barriers everywhere in Cangmu Mountain.Over the past hundred years, there have been countless mortals who want to go up the mountain, but there have never been any mortals who can go up the mountain.

But today, this enchantment was broken for the first time.

Ji Ning was lying obliquely on the bench in Meixin Pavilion, her pair of raised phoenix eyes were slightly squinted, staring at the person who came.

"Jin Ning, long time no see." Bai Yuan reached out and patted the snow flakes on the cloak, and greeted Ji Ning warmly.

Bai Yuan was wearing the uniform of a priest this time, and did not carry a spear or halberd, so he definitely did not come back from the battlefield, let alone calling him to help him fight the enemy.He also didn't have that leisurely mind for the time being, after the battle with Mo Liugu and others, he always felt that he missed something this time.As for what it was, he didn't remember it himself.But every time he held the sword, his mind seemed to collapse, and various rumbling sounds filled his mind like ghosts.

"Yeah." Ji Ning slowly sat up from the bench, "Why are you here?"

Bai Yuan walked up to Ji Ning, looked in the direction Ji Ning was looking at, and saw nothing else, just a few plum branches of a plum tree, which meandered towards the pavilion, climbed up The top of the pavilion.

Seeing Jing Ning talking about himself, but not looking this way at all, Bai Yuan coughed a few times on purpose, "I haven't seen you for such a long time, in the eyes of God Jing Ning, I'm actually no match for the two plum blossoms." " Bai Yuan put his arms around his chest and said intentionally.

Ji Ning laughed dumbly.

"This Mei always reminds me of someone."

Bai Yuan smiled and said, "Who is it?"

"The man in the dream." Ji Ning got up and sat down in front of the white jade table, and Bai Yuan also went to sit opposite him, "Forget it, my latest dream is really weird."

"Can we talk about it in detail?"

"No need." Ji Ning's tone suddenly turned cold, and then changed the subject, "What do you want from me?"

"It's not a big deal. It's just that you are alone in the snow mountain, and you have refused everyone's visits. I'm worried about you, so I came to take a look."

"If you don't have the ability to go up the mountain, you naturally don't have the qualifications to go up the mountain."

Bai Yuan paused, and then said earnestly: "You are alone and helpless on this snowy mountain, what good is it? Why don't you go to Jiuchongtian with me, at least someone will take care of you, that would be great."

Ji Ning finally fixed his eyes on Bai Yuan's face, and replied: "Bai Yuan, you know that you can't force me."

"Since I've lived alone in Cangmu Mountain for so long, I don't want to bother others anymore. Lord Baiyuan should save me this worry."

"What is this..."

"Does God have anything else to do?"

Bai Yuan saw that he issued the order to expel the guest with a calm expression, and no longer insisted on persuading him, so he could only talk about the business: "Is Ziguimu with you?"

Ji Ning took out the stick from his cuff, put it in his palm, and handed it to Bai Yuan: "This?"

"good."

"What happened to it?"

"Do you still remember where it came from?" Bai Yuan asked tentatively.

"The Fourth Highness of the Devil Realm rebelled and led the ghost soldiers to attack the Tianmen. I fought with them for a long time, and then my old wounds relapsed and I passed out on the battlefield. Speaking of this, I still want to thank you for saving my life. Afterwards, Gui Mu appeared By my side, I thought you gave it to me."

"Could it not be?"

Bai Yuan didn't admit it, nor denied it, he just said: "Ziguimu is the blood of Xihe Shangshang. It's the most powerful and the most yang, but you have a yin and cold constitution. It can live in peace with you, and I will Take it easy."

"But I still have to remind you, this thing is extremely spiritual, you have to take good care of it, otherwise you may hurt others. This thing should have been kept in the Ming Palace, but you are unwilling, this wood is also extremely vicious, Anyway, take care."

"Evil? Why can't I see it?"

Others don't know, but Bai Yuan knows it well. After all, this little thing is the main culprit that caused Gu Yanqi, the head of the first palace, to die in a strange way. Who would dare to touch it?Even Bai Yuan would not dare to act recklessly.

But Ji Ning didn't know this.

Ji Ning held the child back to the tree, looked left and right, looked up and down carefully, but didn't see anything hurtful about it.It's just a piece of wood that's the size of a palm, and it's a bit strange, with occasional red spots in the middle.

"...Uh, actually, he's actually... not saying that he can be used as a weapon, but that no one knows how he can hurt people." Seeing Ji Ning's bewildered face, Bai Yuan reluctantly explained Fan, but the more he explained, the more outrageous Ji Ning felt.

Ji Ning looked up: "???"

"Uh, in short, don't let it leave your side."

So why did he listen to Gu Yanqi and erase the memory of Ji Ning?Xie Suiye voluntarily merged with Changning Sword in order to save Ji Ning, and when he arrived, Ji Ning passed out in a pool of blood.Although it is true that losing a lover is extremely painful, for a person as indifferent as Ji Ning, logically speaking, he is not such a person who cannot bear the blow of his children's love!

When Ji Ning was still Su Zaiyu, he did sympathize with what happened to Ji Ning. The Nine Heavens God of War had a heart of compassion for the world. Gu Yanqi asked him to take care of him. As a result, Ji Ning himself was also talented, diligent and motivated, and defeated the enemy. He has his own opinions on tactics and fairy arts, so he appreciates Ji Ning's personality and temper more and more.

The world is impermanent, he never thought that Ji Ning would fall in love with a man.

For a while, Ji Ning seemed to be suffering and suffering in his heart, and he would not talk about it when asked him what happened, but kept everything in his heart.

Once, it seemed to be at the Hundred Flowers Banquet in Tiangong, he asked him: "Shangshen, if you make the same mistake over and over again, does it mean that there will be a fifth and sixth time, and you will fall into it?" Karma, can no longer get rid of it?"

He took it for granted at the time, thinking that Ji Ning was discussing fairy arts with him, so the answer at that time was: "Since it is a mistake that you will all make, it must be a problem. If it were me, I would start from the root, find another way, and cut off A wrong way out."

Ji Ning was silent for a long time, and finally said: "Understood."

It was a long time later that he realized that Ji Ning's karma was actually Xie Suiye, the sharp-edged young man who was full of hostility towards him when they first met.

Thinking about it, I can only let out a long sigh. It would be great if lovers could finally get married.Regardless of the grievances and grievances in his previous life, isn't the present moment the most cherished thing?Ji Ning has been determined to stay in this snow mountain for thousands of years. Besides Xie Suiye, who else can stay by his side?

"Ji Ning, I..."

"...Huh?" Seeing that Bai Yuan suddenly stood up excitedly, Ji Ning thought he had something important to say.

"I, I'll take my leave first." Bai Yuan's forehead felt hot just now, and he almost told Ji Ning directly that Zi Gui Mu was actually Xie Suiye.It wasn't until he met those gloomy and silent dark blue pupils that he calmed down a little.

"Take care of yourself." Before Bai Yuan left, he said the last sentence.

·

Another hundred years passed.

The Divine Beast Pill broke through the seal of a hundred years ago and acted recklessly in Linzhou.Bai Yuan felt guilty and didn't dare to face Ji Ning, so he had to send his disciples to ask for an interview.After Ji Ning assisted him in surrendering Danhuo, he asked him how Danhuo knew his name, but he couldn't answer for a while, because he surrendered Danhuo back then with Xie Suiye, and when he eliminated Xie Suiye, he also eliminated everything related to him , so Danhuo recognized Ji Ning, which really aroused people's suspicion.

Ji Ning has been asking him for a long time, and his ghost is lingering. He usually goes to Cangmu Mountain and looks like he refuses to go thousands of miles away. Even on the battlefield, there is a smear of moonlight everywhere, Bai Yuan almost wants to run away when he sees the white!

At night, Bai Yuan sat in the barracks, helplessly supporting his forehead, learned from the pain, and decided to do things silently.

·

"As long as I finish this matter, you are willing to tell me the reason, right?" Ji Ning came from Cangmu Mountain, traveling against the wind all the way without stopping.In the barracks, under the watchful eyes of all the generals, they confronted Bai Yuan neither humble nor overbearing.

"That's right. However, you have to keep Zi Guimu." Bai Yuan sat on the high platform and said loudly, "I have to leave something on you, otherwise I'm afraid it will go crazy."

Ji Ning didn't say a word, and quickly took off the hair crown, and three thousand black hairs flew like a waterfall in an instant.Then he picked up a pair of scissors and quietly cut off a bunch of hair at the end, about two inches long, and then put this bunch of hair together with Zi Guimu in a dark brown wooden box and sealed it.Finally presented to Bai Yuan.

"Is it possible?" Ji Ning asked.

"Okay. You go. That..."

Bai Yuan originally wanted to warn Jing Ning, but Jing Ning ignored it.Without saying a word, he turned around and opened the gate of the barracks, and left straight away.

No one knew that at this moment Bai Yuan's forehead was already covered with cold sweat, God, we must make Ji Ning safe and sound!Otherwise, he would be the next one to be killed!

This battle is to suppress a group of monster clans in the wild barbarians.These monsters have lived in the barbarians for a long time, and have mutated several times. They are very evil, powerful, and completely changed. They are neither human nor ghost.Those with the head of a bull and the face of a horse, and those with a hydra, are considered normal for the monster race, but those with the head of a fish and the body of a fox with a snake tail, in short, they are barbaric monsters with no strength but no wisdom.

Originally, these barbarian monsters lived well, but one day a monster with a cannibal flower head and a human body suddenly appeared. This monster gradually began to have human thoughts, filled with resentment, and began to incite the barbarian monsters Later, under his leadership, many monsters became obsessed and mutated one after another.As the backbone, the man-eating flower monster began to strategize and carefully set up formations, just to break through the barbarians and invade the human world.

Originally, it didn't take much effort to deal with this group of barbarian monsters.But after all, there are millions of little monsters, if you want to kill them all, it is a problem in terms of numbers.

Later, Bai Yuan came up with a plan to lure the leader man-eating flower monster into the deep valley, and send a large number of heavenly soldiers to ambush at the edge of the valley.

"Why do we have to kill everything?" Ji Ning once asked Bai Yuan.

"Because these monsters are all mutated and brainless monsters, if one is released, the whole barbarians will be in trouble again."

Ji Ning didn't say any more.

But he always felt that something was wrong. He seemed to have experienced this matter before.

It's possible. Over the years, hasn't he experienced few battles?Maybe just forget it.

·

It was a day later when all these mindless monsters were finally led to the bottom of the valley.

This group of mindless monsters bite anyone they see, their faces are hideous and disgusting.Thousands of monsters jumped down from the edge of the cliff one after another, and even rolled down, like a giant mudslide, rumbling to them, leaving no gaps, filling the entire bottom of the valley to the brim.Before the first one finished rolling, the latter rolled down on the body of the former. The roar of "Ho Ho Ho" reverberated at the bottom of the valley, and it lasted for a long time, shaking Ji Ning's ears a little uncomfortable.In this way, Ji Ning had no choice but to transform into hundreds of clones to attract these monsters to move as far as possible to the center of the valley, so that they could gather as densely as possible.

However, after gathering in a group, the avatars/bodies were all suppressed by the group of monsters.That's part of the true energy of tranquility, if you can't get it back, you can't use more advanced spells, and your real body can only hide your body.But if this is the case, the archers on the edge of the cliff will naturally not be able to see the tranquility at the bottom of the valley, and it is extremely easy to accidentally injure them.

Therefore, Jing Ning not only consumes his true energy, but also escapes the rain of arrows in such a dangerous situation.

Ji Ning clutched her chest, stepped on a monster with a tiger's head or a wolf's head, and said in her heart: "Why didn't Bai Yuan release his sword?"

At this moment, on the edge of the cliff.

"Wait a minute, are you sure you're gone?" It was Bai Yuan.

"Your official is very sure!" A fairy official responded to Bai Yuan obsequiously.

"If something goes wrong, I'll take your head and ask!"

"This..." Before the immortal official could finish speaking, Bai Yuan waved his hand and shouted loudly: "Everyone, listen to the order—"

The archers drew their bows one after another.

"Arrows——!!!"

Immediately, thousands of burning arrows rained down from all directions, like a fiery rain.At the same time, the initial roar in the valley gradually turned into a miserable scream, and billowing black and thick smoke came out, mourning for a long time.

There was already a monster trying to climb up the cliff, but was shot down by a bow and arrow.

Ji Ning hides her figure and leans against the cliff to hide.However, due to the loss of too much energy, it finally appeared.At this moment, those monsters that were not shot opened their bloody mouths and wanted to rush over and swallow them.

Bai Yuan on the cliff also saw this situation, and was so panicked that he almost jumped down recklessly. Fortunately, the fairy official just pulled his sleeves: "Shangshen, don't be impulsive! You Look!"

Bai Yuan stopped the foot that almost slipped, and looked in the direction pointed by the fairy official——

At the other end of the valley, a man in red was riding a white horse, stepping on the pile of corpses and the nine-fold karmic fire ignited by Xiongxiong, and rushed towards Jingning.Wherever it passed, no living things were left, and all of them were reduced to ashes, slowly drifting away with the smoke.

The monster in front of Ji Ning was also burned to ashes by a blast of karma at some point, and when the thick smoke cleared in front of him, Ji Ning finally saw the face of the person who came.

The complexion is fair, the fiery red robe is fierce and windy, and the silver boots outline the outline of the straight calf stepping on the saddle.The long black hair was tied obliquely around the plaster-white neck with only a thin red rope. There was a loose oblique strand of broken hair in front of the forehead, and there was a blood-red flame pattern in the forehead.Going down, the pair of peach blossom eyes full of soul are still clear and beautiful, and the upward arc makes one not tempted, but at this moment, it adds a little anger.

Let the black smoke burst out in the valley, the thick fog billow, and mourning everywhere, but in Jing Ning's eyes, he only saw the face of the person who came.Stepping on the karma, the red clothes are shining, like the bright red flowers on the other side of the river of forgetfulness, it is his last salvation in the world.

I don't know why, but I shed tears unknowingly.

The white horse stopped in front of Jing Ning, and all the monsters dared not approach such a dangerous person easily, and they would be swallowed by the fireball if they approached.

The man stretched out a hand and said: "You promised me that you will not put yourself in danger again." Then with one hand, he pulled Ji Ning onto the horse and let him sit in front of him.The whole process was only half a stick of incense, but in Jing Ning's view, it seemed as long as time stood still.

Ji Ning leaned on Xie Suiye's chest, seeing Xie Suiye holding her tightly with both hands, driving the white horse all the way to escape from the dark valley bottom and the rain of arrows, and asked: "You..."

"You want to ask, am I Xie Suiye, or Xie Shao, or Ziguimu, or Sun God Xihe, right?" , but Ji Ning was not panicked at all.

Because this person is somewhat similar to the man in red in the dream.But there are also differences, such as dark brown pupils and blood-red flame lines, which the person in the dream never had.

Although Ji Ning didn't know who the first two people he mentioned were, her chest was suddenly suffocated as if being stung by a thorn.

"Anyone is fine."

"Whether it's Xie Shao or Xie Suiye, they will protect you." After that, the man turned his head and gently kissed away the tears from the corners of Ji Ning's eyes.

Ji Ning's tears came even more violently and uncontrollably, her entire beautiful face was immediately wet, and her already fair face was even brighter, like a piece of melting ice, the tears kept streaming down.

The man was so distressed, he stretched out his hand to hold Ji Ning's cold face, and said: "Don't cry, I'm back."

"Will you still go? Is it true that after I finish this dream, you are leaving?"

The man leaned on his left shoulder, leaned lightly, and kissed his left cheek.

"I swear, never again."

The author has something to say: postscript

First of all, I would like to declare that the author is very clear about his own position, and he is not a master. The postscript is written purely to satisfy the author's own bad taste, to talk about this article, as well as his own feelings and original intentions.

The next thing is the little transparent author's nervous thoughts.If you don't like it, you can leave, thank you.

● Length

At the beginning, I didn't expect that this article would have more than 10 words.Because my original idea was just to write a short story for practice, with a maximum of [-] words.

Therefore, I also hold the determination to rush to the street (it is really rush_(:_」∠)_), and there is no grand setting of the world view. Simply put, there are three places: "above the snow-capped mountains is the Heavenly Palace, and under the snow-capped mountains is the ancient town" back and forth.Not to mention that there are no detailed biographies of the characters. It is only in the process of writing that I become familiar with the two protagonists.You should also be able to see that the second half is the real essence and what I want to express.

At the beginning, I was not familiar with the characters, and I really dissuaded readers. I also know this very well.But if I want to modify it again, I don’t know which direction to change it is better. I always feel that something will be missing.Thinking about it later, no matter what, it can be regarded as a mark on the road of writing, and it may not be impossible to stay there.

Now it seems that it is really very different from my original idea, there are not so many characters and complicated plots.What I thought at the beginning was very simple, just a short story about love and hate.But the author loves dog blood, and there is no cure.So the various partial outlines in the middle let myself go (the outline is actually not counted, just a story outline of about 1000 words) and finally cried with my friends that I couldn’t finish writing... In fact, the author is a poor Chinese. When it comes to big scenes and setting descriptions, I have a headache. .Back and forth, adding plots, changing words, and revising it many times, I won’t spit out the bitterness to you.

●original intention

I think that as an author, the initial enthusiasm often comes from the picture in the mind for a while, and then I want to add bones to this picture to make it a complete story, and then hope that more people will join this story in the discussion.When I wrote it at the time, I thought very simply. I didn't care about any popular topics, lists, points, etc. at all.Only later did I realize, wow, it turns out that Gufeng Xianxia is so aggressive in jj, and only one-fifth of my fast-travel (campus) essays are ahead of me!Of course, after writing all the writing, even if it’s muddled through the center of the earth, I still have to post it hahahaha, as long as there is only one person reading it, it’s OK!

"Chong Yu" is the first danmei essay I wrote.The inspiration came to me in high school. At that time, two images came to my mind: a red and a white couple on a snow-covered mountain covered in silver, a man in red dances a sword, a man in white cooks wine, and plum blossoms rustle behind them. It fell and spread out on the snow.This is one of them.

I don't know who they are, and I don't know if they are male or female, but I really want to know what kind of sparks can be created between cold and warm.

The second picture in my mind is more bloody and tragic - about cutting the heart - and handing over the heart.

I want to know why the man in white stabs into the chest of the man in red without hesitation, and why the man in red is willing to even offer his heart.why?It is obviously a pain that ordinary people cannot bear.

Now it seems that the picture in my mind is clichéd and bloody, but this is my brain hole in high school. After writing a whole story, it can be regarded as an explanation to my young and naive self.

In short, people will not love someone for no reason, let alone hate someone for no reason.The author only plays the role of threading the needle between the overlapping pictures.Although this picture is bloody, it is enough to shake people's hearts. From this, I also have the desire to write.So the two images are intertwined, and now there is "Chong Yu", with Xiao Xie and Ji Ning.

●Character

In terms of characterization, I originally wanted to portray Xie Suiye as that kind of evil and enchanting (?) romantic devil, but the result...well, it is "Innocence and Sao Nian with Righteousness" evolved into "Hiding a dark heart for love" The process of a gorgeous priest with a strong possessive desire that is not revealed".As for Jing Ning, I personally don’t think it’s aloof, it’s just a little cold, tempered, lacking in emotion (bushi. For unimportant people, turn him off for peace, but for important people, he will immediately ooc. In his case At the time of Su Zaiyu, he never really harmed others, and was valued by his father purely on his own strength. Love, hatred, and hatred are also very simple, so he will be used by Gu Yanqi in various ways later. Ning, all kinds of hesitation, of course, because of being deceived by Gu Yanqi. Both of them are my own sons, um, I like them very much!

I have nothing to say about Gu Yanqi, the final big boss. He is in control of all this. In my opinion, he is quite pitiful. He has worked so hard to plan so much, and in the end, he was killed by classmate Xie for love (. Gu The purpose of the banquet is very clear, that is to let Xie Suiye die, return to the wood and save Qing Yuan. The problem is, he doesn't know how to integrate. After all, a living person and standing in front of you, what can you think of? Let him become a piece of wood? You can only take one step at a time. The story of Gu and Qingyuan is bg, and I will write it when I have a chance, but it is not important in this article.

There is another character that makes me feel more complicated, Nan Yi.Because she herself was betrayed, she sympathizes with Ji Ning's experience very much, and has no other feelings. It may be unilateral wishful thinking and "sympathy for each other".But in the end she found that Xie Suiye was not as scumbag as she had imagined, and he was even too nice to Ji Ning, so her heart began to become complicated.She may want them to fall in love, but she doesn't want to, which is very contradictory. In short, this emotion is difficult to explain. Everyone's understanding may be different. You can figure it out for yourself.

Maybe some plots in the middle are a bit far-fetched, but I think that since it is a fabricated story, it is enough to be romantic and touching.Logic is too restrictive for people's imagination, and unconstrained imagination itself does not need a logical framework.I guess some people may say that Gu Yanqi's gold finger is too open, but in fact, this article is just a villain, anyone can do it.Ji Ning's main reason is that he is too shadowed by the past, and he can't say that he has complete trust in Xie Suiye, and he keeps everything in his heart, so he will be used by others. So, communication is still very important, how many texts of be are due to lack of effective communication! (escape).

●The ending

At the beginning, there was no extra episode, and the he of the copy was added later.It also means that Xie Suiye will be a stubborn tree forever and never wake up.He once cursed Ji Ning to die alone in the snow mountain, and the curse took effect, which was painful and hopeless for both of them.

But, later, as I wrote and wrote, I really, um, couldn't help myself.The two unlucky children Xie Suiye and Ji Ning are already suffering so much, the damned author actually! (...) But I like be.Therefore, because I was afraid of being hacked to death, I still decided to be a biological mother. There are two versions of the ending, and you can watch whichever you want.As for the other episodes, I have an idea, but there may be too little time recently, it depends on your enthusiasm!

Then, the shortcomings of this article.I also know that, after all, as a new author, it is impossible to have no faults, such as the description of many scenes is stuck, the logic is useless, the words are poor, and the rhythm of the plot and plot, etc.There are still some places that I think are written in a hurry and rough, and I will change them later!

My criterion for judging my own works is that I try my best to write, and when I feel satisfied, I press the publish button without hesitation, but this standard of satisfaction will gradually rise over time.How to evaluate is a matter for readers, and it cannot change the works created by the author.I hope that in the next article, I can find my own writing style, the more I write, the smoother I write, the better I write, and I hope all the readers will be more and more satisfied!

Finally, I would like to thank you all for your great support for the cute new authors, and for your company all the way. It is fate to see my articles like this!

In the end, I'm here to advertise for the new article!The next article will not be the current style of gossip, it should be a more relaxed one, a modern supernatural fantasy, a love story with a suspenseful flavor about the flower rope.Click the author's column to see it!Click favorites to not get lost!I will also work harder to sign a contract, get out of my comfort zone, and let everyone see a different article.What is not in this article will be in the next article.I hope you can continue to enjoy the food!Love Mud Meng!

——Hexuan 2019.2.23